Download fantasy ebook (11)

1 Name: Chinaren : 2009-01-23 07:32 ID:i+HrmCdp

You can download my complete fantasy/horror/humor ebook at:

It's totally free, and you don't have to register or anything. Coupla clicks max.

2 Name: Bookworm : 2009-10-03 00:56 ID:IYos+Cvy

sup neil

3 Name: Bookworm : 2009-10-10 15:33 ID:LVqBzX/q

Might read it if I ever have nothing to do.

But a grammar mistake on the first page scares me a bit.

4 Name: Bookworm : 2009-10-14 10:48 ID:Heaven

what there's a grammar mistake and on the first page!? I'm not gonna touch it.

5 Name: Bookworm : 2009-10-18 17:30 ID:bClHXoFl

wow that sitelayout is so 90's.

6 Name: Chinaren : 2009-12-01 14:01 ID:GVqmVjie

Mmm, if there's a grammar mistake please point it out to me!

This book's been proofread by about thirty people, and the first part has been critiqued by more than that, so I'm a little bit surprised that an obvious error slipped through.

7 Name: Bookworm : 2009-12-09 00:26 ID:+350qvs5

"He blocking another lunge, lamenting once again the impulse to do a little exploring on his own, away from the safety of his fellow adventurers".

Unless there's a subtlety here I don't get (I'm fairly good at english but not a native speaker), didn't you mean "blocked" ? I believe it's just a mistake due to inattention, but still. On the first page. After proofreading? It's not a good sign to me.

8 Name: Chinaren : 2010-03-21 07:14 ID:DjoHeEmb

Sheesh, you're right. I can't believe that.

That said, the version is a slighly older one. The version available on the new site ( doesn't have this error.

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10 Name: Bookworm : 2010-04-16 17:20 ID:611EBu0Y

I read everything so far. I've got to say, I'm really impressed. It's gruesome, but at least you manage to be fun about it.

I usually don't care for gory/morbid shit in general, although I like the story enough that it keeps me reading.

Keep it up man.

11 Name: Bookworm : 2010-05-03 06:10 ID:8TaVCno5

I'm sold!

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