Good or bad? (7)

1 Name: Bookworm : 2009-05-26 10:35 ID:f/WpKiYv

Well this is not actually a problem or anything, but there's no where else to put it.
I'm kinda writing this short stories. Its about a girl who have to choose between 2 guys. I don't know who to choose between the 2 guys, so please help me.
The first is the kind of guy that's smart, handsome, sporty and well mannered and stuff. Kinda like the perfect Prince Charming.
The 2nd guy even though is smart, handsome and sporty but a real bad boy. Like that guy in your school that you know you should avoid, but you (and the rest of the girls in your school) still have a crush on him. He's kinda like the Dark Knight.
Both of this guys are caring and loving towards the girl.
Please help me...
Thank you

2 Name: Bookworm : 2009-05-26 20:59 ID:EA89rHPJ

Kill them both in a car crash. Think of the possibilities.

3 Name: Ryuuchi : 2009-05-27 01:14 ID:er9zDjZ/

Alright, now that we are in the right place at the right time, let's do this.

You are the creator of the story. You are the writer of the story. If you want a nice ending, then create something on the idea that you mentioned and go from there.

People love to read something that has a conflict and they want to expect something to be resolved either a bad or a good way. You control the story and the flow of it. Make a love triangle situation and maybe who knows, when you write it out between these three characters, you might choose yourself which of the two guys should end up with the girl.

4 Name: Bookworm : 2009-05-27 08:37 ID:nlC7OuGQ

Can't really say unless you give us other details of the story..
General plot line?

5 Name: Bookworm : 2009-05-28 11:00 ID:f/WpKiYv

Long story short..
The girl is normal, wild high school girl. One day she met a really nice guy (Prince Charming) and fell in love. Then suddenly her big brother fell sick and the cure for him is really rare. Along came the Dark Knight who have a cure but he want a price for it. Because she just want to save her brother, she agreed. The Dark Knight took her out on a date. She didn't like it at first but she started to like him more and more. In the end she fell in love with him too. Now she has 2 guys. Then the girl got pressured by the people around her, so one night she just decided to take out all this anger inside her and went racing. She loves motorbike race and goes to the closest race track and just race alone. In the storm. Thing is her mind is so clouded by this fury and pressure that she didn't care about the storm and end up in the hospital. Here's where I'm stuck. She's out of the coma but she doesn't want to wake up. I want her to wake up one day and the first she's gonna see is her true love. One of the boys. But which one?

6 Name: Bookworm : 2009-05-29 19:14 ID:Heaven

Here's my take on the story:
The girl is afflicted with severe down's syndrome and doesn't know it herself. Both guys are really her hired wheelchair pushers and only "care" for her because they'd otherwise be fired on the spot, and because they're high school drop-outs with no qualifications whatsoever, they need this hated job. They're totally disgusted with her and understand none of her emotions, believing her to be some sort of drooling semi-sentient animal.

However, she lives in a fantasy world of her own where she is pretty and loved, where she saves her (non-existant) brother with a rare cure, where she rides a motor-bike and is a strong and intelligent woman. Her coma and awakening are really a romantic fantasy of hers, which she will never be able to communicate to anyone, let alone live out.

The story deals with the uneasy relationship her two male nurses lead with her, torn between disgust and exasperation on one hand and necessity and mutual dependence (they need her to stay employed; she needs them to survive daily life) on the other hand - and the girl's blissful obliviousness of reality.

7 Name: Bookworm : 2009-05-31 23:21 ID:f/WpKiYv

I really didn't think of it like that..
But thanks for the suggestion ^^

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