Let's write a visual kei song! (132)

1 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4882 03:38

>>28,38,48 are potential song titles
>>7,9,18,27,20,21,56,22,42 are potential first verse lines
>>52-55,62-65,72-75 are potential chorus lines
>>40,37,77,50,60,47,57,66,70 are potential second verse lines
>>3,13,23 are potential final lines

>>80-95 each get a chance at arraging the songs as they see fit, based on the given lyrics
>>96-106 each get to suggest corrections or edits to >>80-95's suggestions, at most changing 4 or less lines
>>107-120 each votes on one from >>80-106
>>121 will attempt to annouce the winner

96 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4886 06:55

I think >>95 is a bit short. Why not add some "ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ"?

97 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4886 11:30

Here's the part where we royally fuck shit up!

98 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4886 11:49

What the hell is going on here?

99 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4886 12:36

saa~

100 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4886 12:37

Bob Dole

101 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4886 17:19

progressing the scenario.

102 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4886 23:12

『HOLY LONELY LIGHT』

２４時間うごめく街を
TONIGHT TONIGHT　駆け抜ける
非常階段　瞳の群れが
SIGN OF THE TIMES　捜してる

目がくらみそうな　蒼いダイヤも
ガラスに変わってしまう　
キ・ヲ・ツ・ケ・ロ

HOLY LONELY LIGHT
急げ　自分を信じて
HEAVY LONELY NIGHT
闇の中から答えを見つけ出せ

宇宙を全部くれたって
譲れない愛もある
何が本当か　何が嘘か
わからない時もある

見つめ合うだけじゃ　朝は遠すぎる
抱き締めたい今夜だけ
ヒ・ヲ・ツ・ケ・ロ

HOLY LONELY LIGHT
燃やせ体の芯まで
HEAVY LONELY NIGHT
２度と心は後ろを振り向くな

HOLY LONELY LIGHT
急げ　自分を信じて
HEAVY LONELY NIGHT
闇の中から答えを

HOLY LONELY LIGHT
燃やせ体の芯まで
HEAVY LONELY NIGHT
２度と心は後ろを振り向くな

DON'T LOOK BACK AGAIN
振り向くな
DON'T LOOK BACK AGAIN
振り向くな
DON'T LOOK BACK AGAIN
振り向くな
BABY
DON'T LOOK BACK AGAIN

103 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4886 23:14

FIRE BURNING IN LOVE

VERSE 1:
You greatly overestimate the power, and patience, of DQN
Just like your love
One tear falls on a cold September night...because I'm lonely
Watashi wa otaku desuyo!! Because I have no life.
It's too much metal for one hand!
Is this even in the song?

CHORUS:
It's too much metal for one hand
When those terrorists come from the sand
This world has peacefully ended.
Your bright, cheery smile is like a beacon of light to my cold, calculating eyes.

VERSE 2:
under the moon loli to issho
WHERE DO WE DRAW THE LINE?!? IS this to be TOO MUCH? gakkarisuru
SAFETY NOT GUARANTEED?!?
What does the scouter say about his power level?

When I thought nobody was around,
I spread out my arms and jumped off the ground
The echo of the "BOOOOOOON!" sound
Awoke the DQN

GUITAR SOLO HERE!!!!!!1!

Repeat CHORUS

FINAL LINE GET
FINAL LINE GET

104 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4886 23:41

KITTO ASHITA WA YASASHIKU NARERU HAZU
YURERU KESHIKI WO ZUTTO NAGAMETE IRU

105 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 00:54

キットアシタハヤサシクナレルハズユレルケシキヲズットナガメテイル

This message brought to you by:
GLICO. a nicest people that bringing you Pocky,the delicious snack you can eat!

106 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 01:20

final suggestion GET

107 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 01:31

>>107 votes for >>106

108 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 01:49

I vote for >>81.

109 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 03:00

>>>95

110 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 03:39

>>100

111 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 03:46

>>109

112 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 04:54

>>94

113 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 05:35

I vote for >>82 with >>103's title, but if that isn't possible I go with >>103 for the title.

114 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 06:02

>>95

115 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 10:41

>>82

116 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 10:54

>>82 is awesome

117 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 10:56

( ﾟ ヮﾟ) MOM!!!! LOOK!!! I'M A VIPSTAR!

118 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 10:58

( ﾟ ヮﾟ) ...

( ﾟ _ﾟ) Wait! That's not a good thing, right? Anyway I vote for >>1

119 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 11:09

>>1 is an idiot

I call him the kaiser

120 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 11:11

FINAL VOTE GET!

121 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 11:16

>>1-120 = Jisaku Jien

A winner is you!

It's all because of you,
I'm feeling sad and blue
You went away,
Now my life is just a rainy day and I love you so,
How much you'll never know
You've gone away and left me lonely.

122 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 11:26

>>121
You took your love away from me.

123 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 12:29

Test

124 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 12:30

Test

125 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 12:30

Test

126 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 12:31

are you guys crazy?

127 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 14:25

in actuality i think >>82 and >>95 were tied

128 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4887 23:18

>>127
Actually I voted for >>82 with >>103's title, not realizing that "FIRE BURNING IN LOVE" was already the title of >>82. So it actually won.

129 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4888 00:36

really? I wrote >>82 and >>121

because it's winter

It's all because of you,
I'm feeling sad and blue

You took your love away from me

130 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4959 04:38

Let's get people on writing this!

131 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4968 09:27

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132 Name: ⊂二二二（ ＾ω＾）二二二⊃ : 1993-09-4968 09:27

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