You can download my complete fantasy/horror/humor ebook at:
www.tiredofdeath.com
It's totally free, and you don't have to register or anything. Coupla clicks max.
sup neil
Might read it if I ever have nothing to do.
But a grammar mistake on the first page scares me a bit.
>>3
what there's a grammar mistake and on the first page!? I'm not gonna touch it.
wow that sitelayout is so 90's.
Mmm, if there's a grammar mistake please point it out to me!
This book's been proofread by about thirty people, and the first part has been critiqued by more than that, so I'm a little bit surprised that an obvious error slipped through.
>>6
"He blocking another lunge, lamenting once again the impulse to do a little exploring on his own, away from the safety of his fellow adventurers".
Unless there's a subtlety here I don't get (I'm fairly good at english but not a native speaker), didn't you mean "blocked" ? I believe it's just a mistake due to inattention, but still. On the first page. After proofreading? It's not a good sign to me.
Sheesh, you're right. I can't believe that.
That said, the version is a slighly older one. The version available on the new site (www.TiredofDeath.com) doesn't have this error.
I read everything so far. I've got to say, I'm really impressed. It's gruesome, but at least you manage to be fun about it.
I usually don't care for gory/morbid shit in general, although I like the story enough that it keeps me reading.
Keep it up man.