I wrote a small story (4)

2 Name: Bookworm : 2009-06-21 17:20 ID:6lRX7WS5

If it's not intended to be Caesar you shouldn't call him Caesar. Maybe 'the Caesar', or just 'the King'. You shouldn't need to explain anything before hand. In the same way, I don't think you should include the words "THE END" at the end. It should be obvious where the end of the story is, although it may not be in this case.

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