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Not to start a fight, but: the spacecraft crash is very gimmicky. This kind of thing (having the main character's parents die in a tragic manner in order to give them some internal turmoil) is a known literary cliche. I mean, honestly, how many randomly orphaned children do you know? How many people have to deal with death at a young age?

I realize that this is your personal fantasy so you're free to make it however you like. It's just... not very original, nor realistic.