work in progress manga _help! (39)

1 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-10-21 13:29 ID:xc1v2iJ+

i promise: it'll get good at some point (*some) -hehe...

well before i get ahead of myself let me say this:

there's this story i've had in mind for a while now. and i wanted to make a manga of it (don't worry i can draw, hehe...). but i wanted to run it by u guys first... so here goes:

title:.....make title
genre: comedy, romance(maybe)
sub-genres: action/fighting, drama

  story:

hospital room, two silhouettes seen through those room curtains, two sisters chatting-
random talk leading to one saying : [and i don't ever think ill get a boyfriend](1st sis), sister (2nd sis) says she would and that she would help blah blah...

1st sis: well i cant because im always at this hospital... becuase of-
2nd sis: ill find one for you!
1st sis: but what abou-
2nd: its ok i got a day off!
1st: b,b,b,bbut how!?!?!?! i mean like- is it becau-...!
2nd: hey! don't worry about that, ok?! i'm gonna find u a boyfriend! no matter what!
1st: yeah i know... u can never give up on anything once u got ur mind set eh? your so sweet to be thinking of me...
2nd: don't say that! ur my sister! of course i'm concerned about u, aside:frickin dumbass...
1st: hey! i heard that!
silhouettes fight~
new scene:
mall 2 or more floors. guy leaning over rails.
guy thinks to himself: im such a loser....im not in college yet and... "explains troubles" finishes with deep sigh*
random girl (she's 2nd sis): hello! (very peppy)
guy: (caught off guard) err... hello... ^_^;
girl walks away -she's not brave in these situations
guy sees this as his only chance for happiness, wants to control his destiny, blah blah blah, chases and says [errrr... my names make name, nice to meet you!...ehe?] <- or better phrase
girl stops, blushes, apologizes profusely for interrupting and other unimportant nonsense
guy: so... uhh.. whats ur name... (panics) that's um if u want to tell me and ummm errr....
girl: apologizes more... well, um, my name's make name for girl, um, nice to meet u.... (not making eye contact the whole time she says this stuff)

well, that's it for now! gotta sleep eh... there's more story to come (if this generates any interest! ~imma dreamer~ )
suggest what you'd like to help improve.(besides names~)

byeez

2 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-10-21 17:57 ID:Heaven

( ゚Д゚) ...

3 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-10-21 17:59 ID:Heaven

(⊃Д⊂) rubrub

( ; ゚Д゚) ...

4 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-10-21 18:00 ID:Heaven

(⊃Д⊂) rubrub

( ;; ゚Д゚) what

5 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-10-22 15:12 ID:Q9z4EJQY

So, does the second sister try to get the guy as a boyfriend for the first, only to meanwhile fall in love with him herself?

That's where it seems like you're going, but you didn't really post any plot, or the main point of the "manga."

If you were to sum up the story/plot of the comic in three sentences, along with another 2-3 sentences about what makes it unique, what would you say?

6 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-10-23 04:29 ID:xc1v2iJ+

she IS trying to... but she's now convincing herself whether he's right or not for her sister through various tests. whether she falls or not will be based on your conclusions (what i'm hoping to develop in the story).

plot:

in a hospital room, a girl finds herself without someone to call her own... but her sister will try to change all of that, no matter what! the likely candidate seems to be the hero of our story, but will he make the cut or be destroyed in the process!?!?!!? who knows!

unique-osity (my made-up word):

it's hopefully gonna be a fighter rom./com. manga. i kinda alluded to that in my second part of the story(which never got posted because of a comp err-or). towards the end it'll hopefully be dramatic. and at the very end evey body that reads this (all 2 of you) will be like WTF!?!!?!
i'm gonna try to post from memory now:....

7 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-10-23 06:02 ID:xc1v2iJ+

guy: sooo... are you by yourself?
guy thinks about what he just said, panics, and says: it's not that i'm trying to hit on you or anyting (he is...), it's just that, you know, nowadays, there's all these wierdos (ppl on 4ch) about, ummmm, it isn't safe and a girl shouldn't be by herself, i mean, like something bad might happen, i'm not saying something bad will happen but, uhhh... (to self:[what am i saying?!?!?!]) and umm... don't think i'm not trying to threaten you or anything, because i'm not, it's just (to self:[CRAP!! {{{{;(>A<);}}}} what do i say to fix this??!])..............

soOoOOooO, would u mind if i accompany u?

silence, wind blows cactus by...

girl looking down, blushing: sure... , if that's ok with you...
guy totally caught off guard: re-really!?!
girl: well, i did come up to you first... i hope you didn't think i was some kind of freak, just randomly coming up like that... it's just that i wanted to get to know you... (-she's playing innocent eh?-) o just got it in my mind that i gotta meet this guy!... you must thing i'm some stupid freak, right?
guy: what guy would ever think that!?!!?!?!?!?! <<(thinks she's prettttttttyyyyyy~) i'm glad you came up to me ^^!
girl: so, ummm, tell me about yourself.
guy: i go to college and major in studio art, i do office work in a big office building and get decent pay, and i live by myself in a great apartment...
girl: REALLLLLYYYYYYY~~~~? 0.0*
guy: uhhh, nooo... i don't go to college yet, i work in a supermarket, and i live with my parents in their house.... T_T
girl: giggles well, i go to college majoring in archaeology, i work at a restaurant, and i live with my older sister(3rd sis)(she might be worked in...) and younger sister(1st sis). we share an apartment that's not all that good, but good enough. lately, i've been on a break from everything, to relax and stuff... wow, yor life sucks by comparison!
guy looks like he got stabbed
guy: ....ehe.... ^_^;
girl: i know how to cheer you up! let's go shopping eh?
takes guy by arm (audience goes: awwwwwrwwwwwrwrwrwrrrrww....) she drags him into the nearest store
guy: hey! this is a game store! your into games!?!!?!
girl: yeah i got into them when i had free time... i've been having alot of free time lately!
guy: damn!, you don't meet a girl that's into games everyday! (trying not to sound like a gamer...) i play every so often.... (to self: [i play 4 hour sessions! T_T] -unhealthy!)
girl: yeah, sometimes i'll play for 4 hours... or more!
guy: ehehe^_^;... (can she read minds?)
girl: wow there's so many more games here than i saw last time...
guy: hey are you into fighting games?
girl: HELL YEAH! (fire in eyes)
guy: look! there's a new marvel vs. capcom! Mvs.C 3!!! it features a new 4-player battle system with 2v2, 3v1, and free for all battles in all game modes! there's online capabilities, rankings, and 1337 playable characters, some of which aren't from marvel or capcom!!! (i wish it existed)
simultaneously: ooooo... mmmmMMMMYYYY.... GAARRRRWWWWSSHHHHHH!!!!!0_o

8 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-10-23 06:02 ID:xc1v2iJ+

continue....

they both reach for it, make hand contact, freeze, then eye contact, freeze, girl takes initiative and clumsily takes it.
girl: let's both get one! (the case was a disply box)
they go up to the cashier and each buy a copy. they then leave store.
girl: hey let's go here!
girl takes over shopping trip and starts buying stuff for herself. tons of bags later (which the guy is holding)...
girl: oh no! the malls about to close any time now(...at six).
guy: you probably want to leave me now, right? (thinking he will never see her again) T_T
girl: no, i was just thinking... that,ummm.... we should go get something to eat...
guy: really?! let's go!
girl: ok, we can take my car!
guy: (to self:[she has a car! i do suck... T_T]) ok...
girl now what garage floor was it on?
~followed by funny scenes where they go to different floors while the guy struggles with all the bags (azumanga daioh style maybe)~
girl: oh! it's this one! it's the only one left!
guy: (exhausted) uh... finally!...
thay load everything into the car, guy drops some items of course...
girl: hmmmm... i was just thinking...
guy: you wanna leave me now right!?!
girl: giggles no, that's not it... i was just thinking that tonight looks reeally nice. why don't we walk instead and get the car later?
guy: ok! (to self:[i thought she was gonna leave ^_^])(relieved)
they walk out together awkwardly, since there's nothing distracting them from each other such as bags (for the guy) or stores (for the girl). after a bit of walking:
guy: so where're we going?
girl: i thought u knew!
guy: u mean we've jus been walking aimlessly!?!
girl: hehe... guess so!^_^
guy: well i kinda know this area... and there's this restaurant that's close by that i wanted to go to... it's the closest one around this area...
girl: really?! where is it, we can go try it out!
guy: well, by closest restaurant... i mean it's in the opposite direction we're walking now-
girl: well that's ok! where is it?
guy: two miles back.....
girl: OK! let's go! ^_^(peppy)
guy obviously tired: let's go...
they walk for a while (so like two scenes where time transition is shown).
then suddenly!....
three (... or four -haven't got set on a number yet) guys in black trench coats show up! their face are hidden.
trench 1: stupid girl, come with us! or else!
guy gets defensive: what the hell do u guys want!?!!
trench 2: (calmly)it's none of your concern.
guy gets angry: like hell it ain't! you can't just come up and ask for someone to come with u like that! (to girl:) get behind me
trench 3: (firmly) hand her over now!
guy: ...well, u guys gotta fight me first!!!

find out what happens next time on dragonball Z! just kidding...

constructive citicism welcome! part 2 end.

byeez

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10 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-10-23 20:54 ID:Heaven

Nah, I don't think this will be replacing Needler Hall anytime soon.

11 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-10-24 01:41 ID:KZkOMaIH

Girl shits in her car.

12 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-10-25 05:35 ID:xc1v2iJ+

goodbye! ^_^

13 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-10-27 02:46 ID:PO2ndcxW

posting in a legendary thread

14 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-10-28 06:18 ID:A4zashZL

13 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-10-27 02:46 ID:PO2ndcxW [Del]

posting in a legendary thread

what do you mean by that? i kinda gave up, after all the discouragement, i guess this thread's closed?...

15 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-10-29 16:27 ID:Q9z4EJQY

>>14
don't give up, try to improve!

If Shounen Jump mangaka gave up everytime a script of theirs was rejected, there wouldn't be any anime.

16 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-10-30 06:08 ID:W5bOnDVa

>>15
thanks, anyway let's see....
ch 3, part 1:
trench1: alright, i'll be your opponent, dumbass!
throws off trench coat, he's stocky (short, fat -ish)
trench2: i hope you don't get carried away...
trench1: shut up, i can handle this idiot (to idiot(guy):) you shouldn't mess with affairs that doesn't concern you, you idiot!
guy: stop lecturing me, old man... let's go!

switches to Mvs.C3 mode

character select screen, guy vs. trench1, begin...

"game" announcer: Ready...?, F I G H T !

...fighting scenes like 2d fighters...

>guy's getting his ass handed to him, hp 25%
>trench1 dominating, hp 100%

guy does special...

guy: shiiinnnkkuuuuuuu.... meeegggaaaa.... hyyypeerrrr..... busterrrrr!
trench1 parrys(pressing forward or block at the right time to cancel hits/damage) special, says: is that all you got (like game villain)?
guy in blocking mode, to self: shit...
girl: beat his frickin ass!
guy turns to girl, says: I'M TRYIN TO-!!!

trench1 see's opening, thinks: here's my chance...
trench1 does throw move (punch+kick, in fighting games throws are unblockable usually), guy bounces from throw (this happens in fighting games too), trench1 juggles guy (hitting an opponent in the air repeatedly while grounded), trench1 is about to do a special after re-juggling into air... guy has 2% hp left
trench1: feel my wrath! exploding punch!...
girl: no don't!!!

"game" announcer: A NEW CHALLENGER APPEARS!

char. select and so forth...
girl vs, trench1 !
blah, F I G H T !

girl: now, your fights with me!
guy, dazed: *~yeah! go get him mommy~
trench1: errr..., let's go.

girl starts with standard 3-hit combo (usually low punch, med punch, hi/heavy punch) takes out 20% from trench1. trench backs up, then leaps in, lands, does a crouch heavy kick (a sweep kick that knocks down standing opponents), girl blocks, takes 1%hp, girl jumps, leaps in with kick (hi attacks can beat crouches). trench1 takes 5%, gets knocked back. girl backs up, trench1 gets up, girl dashes forward, trench1 throws a med kick. girl cancels dash into jump, lands with med punch. girl crouches, does a knock up attack (usually down+hi punch, knocks opponents into air). girl hyper jumps (allows for following opponents being knocked into air). girl performs aerial rid (combos done in the air). girl lands, juggles trench1 back into the air with knock up attack, another aerial raid, girl lands, performs knockdown kick (forward+heavy kick) on trench1, when he bounces back up (like throw), she does special...

girl: valkyrian light spear!

she spears him with a REALLY bright spear.
"game" announcer: SPECIAL K.O.!

-1,337-hit combo!-

girl rushes to guy, says: come on let's go!

they leave while the light blinds the trench guys...

trench1: f***cccckkkk! that stupid girl!!! mrarrgh!
trench2: get up, we'll track her down.
trench3 looks at trench1, says: ...pathetic! because of you, we lost her!

ch3, part1 end... wow this part was short! (compared to other parts)

thanks again guys/girls/random... other parts should be up eventually... thank you for reading, please keep reading...

17 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-10-30 22:26 ID:PO2ndcxW

posting, again, in a legendary thread

18 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-10-31 06:53 ID:Csu8IRVG

ch.3 part 2, press start to continue...

side note: i didn't know this before, but you have to click [thread page] in first post to view all my nonsensical b.s. ...if you want to...

guy n' girl running... (they'll keep running through this entire scene...)

girl: so where's the restaurant?...
guy thinks to himself:[how could i let myself get beat up in front of a girl im trying to protect!...]
girl: hello~?...
guy thinks to self:[damn, im so weak T_T...]
girl: anyone home?...
guy thinks to self:[i mean, she's the one that beat up that fat bastard, what the hell!?! >_< why couldn't i do that?...]
girl: are you listening?...
guy thinks to self:[she even did a special k.o., i tried that and got parried (remember parrying?) like hell! that whole incident didn't go well... i wonder who they wer-]

girl punches guy in face they stop running...

girl: HEL-FRICKIN-LO~!?!?!?!!>O<

guy's on ground, sitting, with a very hurt face... T_T;

guy: umm..., i'm sorry did you say something? ^_^;
gril: *ahem**, where's the restaurant that we're running all this way to at?
guy: i'm sorry i was kinda lost in thought... oh! look it's right there! (points to restauarant he's sitting in front of cuz of punch in face...-lo punch btw-)
girl: good thing i stopped you, huh?
guy: yeah... thank goodness... :rolleyes: ^_^

the restaurant looks really nice, velvet ropes, "classy" neon signs, palm trees, spotlights...

inside the restaurant...

girl: wow! look at this place!
guy: yeah, i know right!
girl: it's just so...
guy: yep, yes it is...
girl: i mean like, this place-, this place...
guy: i know exactly what you mean...
...this is the sh*ttiest restaurant ever... T_T (the inside looks like one of those corner street restaurants found in the city... not the nice part...)
girl: well, you ~did~ say you wanted to try this place, so shall we?
guy: i guess, why not...
girl: and the outside looked so nice too...^_^

fat guy with stained "white" t-shirt has cigar in mouth, speaks like it (fat guy): here's yer menuuue'z! (notice dialect)
tosses them two pieces of paper that say "MEN3W" -(look at it upside-down...^_^)

guy: let's see... (he's saying this, no matter how cliche it is, because he's with a girl he doesn't know and he's trying to break the silence with random talking, intuitive thinking, eh?)
girl: so what are you gonna have? (same as above, switch genders)
guy: i don't know... this place seems shady, and i don't exactly trust the "MEN3W"... i mean like they have: *lists gourmet dishes like steak, lobster, sushi, etc." for around 10$ each!
girl: yeah... strange... i'm gonna get the steak!, and lobster!, and sushi!, and noodles!
guy: i'll take the safe road, and just get the rice noodles with pork, there's no way they can mess that up! (tis a simple dish...)
fat guy: so, ya ter(two) reddies(ready) ta order? hmmph... spits at floor
guy: i'll get number 2, with pork. (the noodles)
girl: i would like steak, lobster, noodles with chicken, wait actually pork, and ummm... well just give me side A. of the menu (the front of the menu, the WHOLE thing)!
guy: O_0 are you sure?
girl: what, you don't think a big girl like me can finish it? (isn't she cute?) ha!? ya bastard! (starting to show true colors... still cute, eh?) come on! let's have an eating competition! (girl turns to fat guy) he'll have side A. too!
fat guy: all-ryt. spits at floor

fat guy goes in back, guy and girl both watch him dissapppear behind the doors, 2seconds later, fat guy comes out with all the dishes, they look at each other surprised, obviously.

19 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-10-31 06:54 ID:Csu8IRVG

continue...

guy: damn, that was fast...
girl: mmph? (already started eating, has fork in one hand and hot sauce and spoon in the other, she's prepared eh?)
guy: whoah, your serious, ahaha...
girl: oo eht-yer ny-art...
gulps
i mean, you better start! you're never gonna beat me! mwahaha!
thunders
guy: o yeah?!... (starts to eat) ...wtf!?!? this stuff's really good!!
fat guy: what'dya spect(expect) didn'ya (didn't you) sees the outside a'(of) this playshe(place)?
guy: ehe... yeah... ^_^;

they competitively eat for a while... girl is waaayy ahead, she has a chance to stop and watch him...

girl: hey!... (you know, one of those soft "hey"s meant to catch someone's attention that's close by, just wanted to clarify this)
guy: hmmph? (face full of food, face is also swollen from punch)
girl: you better be nice to me ok?
guy: uht dy-oo myuh-een?... (mouth full of food)
girl: giggles what did you say?
guy: gulps(manners these days, tis a shame...) what do you mean? small smile shot back at her-her smile was left over fom the giggle- (another one of those break the ice moves, i like to observe peoples' actions and intentions, obviously =p...)
girl: well, if you treat me well, i'll bring you good luck, it's kharma ya' know...
guy: ont uri...
gulps
...ehe, don't worry... i will.
girl: hmmm... your losing you know?
guy: WHAT!?!? how did you eat so much, there's nothing left!
girl: well... there is this one piece... (a piece of steak) ...tell ya what: if i don't finish it by the time you do, you win, kay?
guy looks at mountain of food he has left, thinks to self:[there's no way i'm gonna finish all my food before she can finish that piece! ...wait, that's it-!]

he eats her piece

girl smiles, says: wow! your smart! (the technicality is that she says: "if i don't finish it by the time you do,..." it could either mean that piece or all of his food, he chose that piece...)
guy: damn right! i whuh- begins to cough -in(trying to say win) -hack*, ehhh, uhhh... Xp
girl: oh my! did i put too much hot sauce in there? i'm sorry i like to eat very spicey food... ehehe... here have some water (she really is innocent, in case you thought otherwise, remember hot sauce up there?)
guy gulps down water, says: how can you eat that stuff?!?! gets more water
girl: i always ate like that since i was little, i guess it's an acquired taste!
guy: well, anyways... i win!
girl: yep, you figured out my evil plan! mahahahaha! thunders (peppy) (isn't she cute?)

they laugh i would use bubble tone for this scene in the would-be manga(actually i would use bubble tone A LOT). audience (all two of you) goes: aawwwwwwww....

guy: well, this was a lot better than expected!
girl: and we got to try out a lot of dishes!
guy: err... don't mention that, i'm too full... it was all a blur.... ending in flames..., on my tongue... T_T
girl: ahah, sorry bout that...
guy: ...(silence, thinks about what to do next)
girl: hey!... uhh-(tries to propose something but-...)
fat guy: ere's(here's) yer(your) billz! itz(it's) 450.88$, 'ow(how) will ya'z(you) be payin, eh? ahoomph spits on floor
girl: i'm out of money! ^_^ (peppy) spent it all today!
guy: i'll take care of it... T_T (thinks to self: [i'm gonna end up poor... oh CRAPP! where's my wallet! did i drop it during the fight?(yes) CRAP! where is it?])
girl: is something wrong?
guy: eheh... nooo.... everthing's fine~
fat guy: so where'sh da(the) munny(money)?
guy: ummm, hold on please~... (to self: [CRAP, CRAP, CRAP!! where is it!???!!? think of something!!!!]) to girl: ahhhhh.... you look nice! (:[why did i just tell her that!?!!?!? this isn't my day...])
girl: (surprised) why, thank kyuu! (i like the "kyuu")
random guy walks in, says: hey, is this someone's wallet?
guy: hey! that's mine! check the i.d., it's me!
random guy: hey! it is! her ya go~! ^_^

guy flashes back to when girl says: "well, if you treat me well, i'll bring you good luck, it's kharma ya' know..."

20 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-10-31 06:56 ID:Csu8IRVG

ch.3 part 2 end... thanks for reading, posting, so forth..., you know i appreciate it! ^_^. penguins...

i had to post this here because my last post was too long by 40 characters, even after i split the original ch3 part2 post... (over by 3440 characters)... ^_^;

byeez~

21 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-01 05:16 ID:Heaven

You'll never get good at creating manga, and drawing in general. You never get to that point of being a good artist. You are not serious about making a good one. You're just here for attention. If you're serious about it, you wouldn't be acting the way you are, it's annoying. Do us a favor and disappear, and save us from reading your future crappy manga. I thank you for that.

22 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-11-01 09:42 ID:Csu8IRVG

>>21 i like your way of thinking. a manga artist never gets "good". they just keep improving, so long as they try. everyone has to struggle past natural abilities, limitations, and so forth when they are shooting for something. i've NEVER written a script before, and i guess, to you, it shows. but that's where your logic ends. for what you say afterwards, the following would have to be true: i posted/reposted(due to crashes) all that up there for attention... i said goodbye and was about to leave for attention... i said this thread was closed, again, for attention... those factors don't seem to lead to the fact that i was going out for anymore attention than any author of a thread would. i was about to give up on this thread, but then i got encouragement from somebody, and then praise from someone else (after it was closed). blame those people for my return. also, what have you noticed about my behavior that would lead you to conclude that i am not serious about this project? i understand the annoying part may be that i give up easily on this thread, but that is because there are other (and maybe more *helpful) forums out there. i use 4ch because i like random postings. and to the last of your comments: no, and i'm sorry you didn't read the disclaimer "work in progress", i.e. you may not want to read this because you have the free will not too. but, i do thank you for the comment, this may clarify my intentions more. also, i would prefer not to bump this comment, but i don't know how not to. it will only get ahead of one other thread so that's okay... i'll just bump that one.

please note: i'm not trying to make any enemies i don't have to, so let's not start a flame war or anything else of the sort. i've seen it happen. i am absolutely sure you would be willing to comply. i thank you in advance and apologize to you for any inconvenience.

23 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-01 12:52 ID:Heaven

>>22

If you like his way of thinking, go away.

24 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-01 14:27 ID:Q9z4EJQY

>>22
By the way, any samples of your drawing?

26 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-11-02 04:02 ID:Heaven

oops... dont click the fourth, its small...

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/8820/roamygv0.jpg

27 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-09 23:01 ID:xGAncA62

>>25
if you did a whole manga in that style it would be painfully ugly, you need a hell of alot more practise those really are quite shit your not paying any attention to line work or composition, it looks like youve gripped the pencil with your fist and just started scratching away.
btw im guessing your ... 14?

28 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-10 11:57 ID:Heaven

>>27
I actually liked the detail put into them... as black & white pictures, I guess.

For manga you would have to do it over in pen, use screentones, draw bokes, etc.

You have talent, so it's not impossible. Keep up the practice!

29 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-10 21:00 ID:TDQfX9Q9

She has all the talent of a 14-year-old Japanese girl.

30 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-10 23:13 ID:Heaven

>>25

You call those drawings?

If you can't draw, don't draw.

With that quality, you shouldn't even contemplate of making a manga, it's quite laughable. And unless this is a hobby, you won't get anywhere.

Another thing is your attitude is very annoying. The use of "hehe" and ^_^, and those silly girlish remarks and ettiques absolutely getting on my nerves.

This is my honest opinions, if you can't take it, leave.

31 Name: pen-guin guy : 2006-11-14 02:04 ID:Heaven

obviously i left this forum for good reason, i wanted you guys to comment on story composition, absolutely no one did, encouragement was nice but not enough to stay, not now. i hate spam posts. the pictures are bad because they were done darker than usual to show up on a (old) scanner ("gripped...with fist" was pretty close). the rest of 4-ch is very nice/helpful for the most part... the manga section must be the dark/hateful side... i won't miss this place. (random idiot yells: we won't miss you!!! stupid 14 year old girl!!!) - yeah, i preempted you guys... 14 year old girl was what you guys came up with for an insult??? well, im insultd, i guess...

>>28 thank you. i would clean them up, but i have little time for anything but sleep/work/sketches.

THIS PLACE IS CLOSED! LET IT GO. LEARN SOME MANNERS. BTW, DO YOU GUYS THINK 14 YEARS OLD IS AN AGE MORE MATURE THAN WHAT YOU ARE CURRENTLY?

i didn't want to stoop to something that stupid/tasteless...

(random idiot yells: ****profanities****)

32 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-14 18:33 ID:Heaven

You are not going to get very far if you can't deal with criticism in a mature way, regardless of talent.

You do sound like a 14-year-old. (Mostly because of poor style: sentences should have an initial capital letter, use "you" instead of shorthand gibberish like "u", the word "I" is always uppercase, etc etc.) How old are you really?

33 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2007-01-08 18:30 ID:Heaven

4-ch needs a 'legendary threads' board, and this needs to be archived as one.

34 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2007-01-12 09:57 ID:4HRUJfmg

ouch flames, ouch ouch ouch. anyway, you entertained me with that, I laughed hard, wzz like, WTF

35 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2007-01-13 08:49 ID:8PDfwVtM

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36 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2007-01-13 08:56 ID:8PDfwVtM

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37 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2007-01-17 11:19 ID:Heaven

>>33
Make a 'legendary threads' thread, and link 'em.

38 Name: me : 2007-03-04 01:03 ID:JTuRLmdi

this forum has made me finnally ask these questions...

  1. man...why do people post their drawings on forums?
    (show ur drawings to FRIENDS!, not flamers)
  2. there's a lot of flamers that envy artistically talented 14 year olds
  3. the super cool manga ka people are like 30 years+ and still haven't learned to grow up (perverts, maybe all these good artistic 14 year olders can change that!) ^_^

39 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2007-03-11 23:33 ID:RLm+3PJB

if he's a good artist (which i see the potential for, but he needs practice) he should partner with a good writer.
most manga/comics written and drawn by the same person blow.

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